[url]www.36grayslane.co.uk[/url]

Discussion in 'Campaigns' started by FluffyBunny, Jul 21, 2007.

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    Spunky is putting the first draft together

    here

    I like it (although I'll suggest another colour :D ) but have suggested a whole page for each objection and an in-depth rebuttal.

    We have permission from Mrs Norton to use her letter, pictures etc and she's working on finding some better resolution pictures for posters/website.

    As PTP may have had in mind, we are mocking up a picture of a CR2 trundling down Grays Lane to demonstrate you really can get a tank down it ........

    I'll have another look when I get back later today (if the car doesn't let me down. It's not keen on rain ....)
     
  2. ViroBono

    ViroBono LE Moderator

    It's coming along. A few suggestions:

    1. I'd change the font to make it a bit easier to read, and make the style consistent.

    2. The Home page headline should be in capitals - big ones.

    3. The explanation of what it's all about should perhaps include a map showing where DMRC is, to give some perspective to the distances that families often have to travel.

    4. A pic or two of patients in DMRC would be good - I'll try and source some.

    5. How about a page including a few letters showing the breadth of support for this campaign/the SSAFA house, especially from: anyone well known, overseas, or from those currently in sandy places.

    6. Consider including a PayPal link for donations.

    7. Consider links to some of the press articles.

    Apologies if this is egg-sucking stuff!
     
  3. Agreed on all the above. I'll pass on comments this today.

    If you pop back again, you'll see Spunky has started expanding the objections page.

    Dozy - can you let us have the collected wisdom counter to each of the objections?
     
  4. Yup - will send that through to spunky ASAP.