New Book, Wasted Resource by Steven Preece

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  1. Well, I've finally finished the damn thing. Its been driving me around the twist for 3 solid years now.

    Its on Amazon and is currently hot of the press.

    Wasted Resource: Amazon.co.uk: Steven Preece: Books

    The book is an crime, action and adventure story that also highlights issues that some former service personnel experience, such as homlessness, PTSD, Alcoholism and the difficulties with settling in civvy street. I've made them more interesting though as I've snapped them into the story line.

    Additionally, it highlights the Waste of Military skills after soldiers demob, when could be better utilised to fight against, organised crime, drugs and terrorism etc




    Synopsis:

    Four former soldiers, who are brought together by fate, realise their military skills have become a wasted resource. They form as a team, utilising their specialist skills to steal a vast sum of money, previously recovered by the police and guarded by the RAF Regiment. The task is initially deemed impossible, but a stroke of luck changes this.
    Two illegal immigrants on the run from their own country, enter the UK via the Channel Tunnel. They plan the same heist without knowledge of the other team, carrying out a raid on one of two heavily guarded security vans.
    The money is stolen, leaving one group empty handed and pursuing the other; resulting in kidnapping, torture and death. Eventually, the captors are led to a hidden weapons cache in Northern Ireland, where the money is stashed.

    Newly promoted, Detective Sergeant Dave Watson is assigned by the police as lead investigator and highlights the likelihood that the robbers have military skills and backgrounds. CCTV film footage is acquired from the channel tunnel and motorway cameras and is scrutinized, identifying the team and also two Kurds as known hardened criminals

    Meanwhile, M.I.6 express an interest in recruiting the former soldiers, wanting to setup a covert operations group and cover up their part in the robbery. However, changed plans alter this course and the team are double-crossed, leaving them to attempt to getaway!

    Cheers

    Steve
     
  2. This is the Prologue & First Chapter. I have watered down any swear words so as not to offend anyone. Also: Sorry if the formatting is all over the page.Note: It is also available via the library.

    PROLOGUE

    Trained soldiers have a repertoire of fighting skills and specialist
    training that they use in dangerous and hostile situations. When
    they leave the armed forces, these skills are no longer of value to
    society and become a ‘wasted resource.’
    Some former service personnel experience problems when moving
    on from life in the military, such as homelessness, alcoholism,
    PTSD, depression and even misuse of their specialist military skills
    within organised crime and terrorist activities.
    This story portrays some of those issues and the harsh reality of
    the adaptation to civvy-street of four former soldiers, with their
    specialist skills being used to the detriment of society, rather than
    to continue to protect it!


    Chapter One

    Moonlight pierced through an overcast sky, splaying shadows
    around the gloomy entrance of a derelict building in Liverpool.
    Gusts of wind were rattling the secured doors and blowing rain
    down onto several homeless people sheltering there.
    Spike’s stubbly face poked out from his tattered, wet
    sleeping bag. He was flushed and desperately in need of warmth.
    He hunched his broad shoulders and squeezed the material tightly
    around his neck, unintentionally forcing water to seep through onto
    his clothing. He rolled his eyes and gazed up at the damaged
    canopy overhanging the entrance to the building.

    ‘It’s going to be a long cold night,’ he rasped to a frail old man lying next to him.

    The man was weak and suffering from hypothermia. He
    frowned and nodded his head as the rain bounced off his face. He
    shook uncontrollably in the unforgiving cold and quietly closed his eyes. His body fell limp and his final breath dissipated into the freezing air, as his tormented spirit was set free.
    It was an arduous life living on the streets amongst
    strangers. Keeping warm and dry was as tough a challenge as
    finding food, but ironically, alcohol was never too difficult to comeby.

    Spike had heard all kinds of reasons why people ended up
    living like this. Yet some preferred it, choosing to cut away from a normal everyday lifestyle. He sighed heavily, tucking his head down out of the elements. Spike did not know the dead man and was unflustered by his death. It was a sight he had seen many times before when serving as a Royal Marine Commando during the second Gulf war in 2002. He was an Assault Engineer then, highly skilled and experienced in the handling and use of explosives. Two years after the war he had completed nine years service and chose to leave. Sadly, his move into civvy-street had not worked out for him. His once-muscular body was almost skeletal and his short, brown hair was shoulder length and matted with grease and dirt. His memory had deteriorated too, leaving him uncertain as to how he had ended up living this way.
    His sleeping bag succumbed to the torrential rain,rendering it useless.

    ‘Balls to this,’ he said aloud. ‘I am going to find somewhere warm to sleep tonight.’

    He pushed his head up out of his partially unzipped bag and set
    eyes on a man dressed in a black padded jacket and woollen hat.
    He was rifling through the old man’s clothing.

    ‘Hey! Leave him alone. Take your hands out of his pockets now!’
    he snarled at the stranger, whilst struggling to get his arms free from the inside of his own soggy bag.

    ‘Pish off and mind your own business!’ the tall thief snarled,
    counting the money he held in his hand. ‘He’s dead. It’s of no use to him.’

    Spike struggled to free himself. ‘Put it back you thieving
    bastard!’ he growled.

    ‘I said pish off and mind your own business!’ The thief
    punched Spike hard in the face.

    The blow made a heavy thudding noise; his nose crunching under
    the man’s fist. Blood dripped from his nostrils into his mouth. He scrunched his face up and recoiled in fury. His fiery temper
    exploded as his arms finally tore free. Spike lunged at the thief but stumbled clumsily onto the floor with his feet still entangled in the bag.

    The stranger made his exit turning and running off into the
    distance. He fiddled with his pocket, pushing some money inside
    and securing it.

    Spike picked himself up and gave chase along a deserted
    road away from the suburb. He sprinted fast and was soon closing
    right behind him, struggling to maintain the pace. His lungs were
    almost bursting and a growing tightness in his diaphragm forced
    him to stop. He held his chest with both hands, gasping for air. He paced around with his hands on his hips, dressed in a green parka with a shoelace hanging down from his waist securing his soaked jeans. He could feel his heart pounding and concentrated on steadying his breathing. Blood continued to trickle down his face and dripped onto his black trainers. He gripped his bleeding nose and threw a clot down, landing on his shoe. He kicked out flicking it onto the nearby waste ground.
    The blustery rain had eased and a damaged street light
    afforded improved visibility. Spike heard someone behind him and
    spun around. The thief lunged at him with a broken floorboard, but Spike slipped the blow and used the momentum gained to grab his adversary by the throat. The man twisted around, seized Spike’s wrist and effortlessly threw him to the ground. Spike twisted free and expertly reversed the position to regain his feet. The man rolled forward breaking Spike’s hold and equally found his footing in one fluid movement.

    ‘Shi?!’ Spike gasped. ‘Are you some sort of martial arts
    nut?’

    The thief stood in a boxing stance, readying himself. He
    paused. ‘No. I’m an ex-marine; mate and I know how to handle
    myself. If you want some more, come and get it.’

    ‘No, wait!’ Spike panted. ‘I’m a marine too. I really am. I’m
    an ex Boot Neck the same as you?’

    ‘Are you serious or is this just bullshit to get me to drop my
    guard?’

    ‘I’m deadly serious, mate. My name’s Spike. What’s
    yours?”

    ‘Bungy. My name is Bungy.’

    Spike recognized the name from his service days. Bungy
    was a nickname given to marines who had a surname of Williams.
    The two men relaxed and moved closer. Spike held his hand out
    and they shook hands, lightly at first and then more sincere.
    Bungy then removed his hat and ran his fingers through his short,
    dark hair, brushing it across his forehead in a parting. A nearby
    street lamp allowed them to see they were of similar age, late
    twenties.

    ‘Why did you steal the old man’s money?’ Spike asked,
    still seething about it.

    ‘He was dead,’ Bungy coughed, clearing his throat. ‘The
    money was no good to him any more. I’m hungry. I haven’t eaten
    anything for days. You know what it’s like living on the streets.
    We have to scavenge to survive.’

    ‘Yes, I suppose that’s fair enough,’ Spike conceded.
    Rain started to teem down heavily again and a gusty wind
    made them shiver, mercilessly penetrating their saturated clothing.

    ‘Come on Spike; let’s find somewhere warm to sleep
    tonight. I’m bloody freezing. I feel like shit and my body is shaking with this damn rain and cold.’

    ‘Okay, mate,’ Spike answered. ‘Have you got a sleeping
    bag?’

    ‘Yes, it’s in a doorway just a short distance from yours.’

    ‘Okay, let’s go and get them and shelter somewhere.’

    Both men returned to the area where they had previously
    met and noticed that an ambulance had arrived. Its rotating blue
    light illuminated the doorway whilst the medical crew were busy
    lifting the corpse onto a stretcher. A police officer gave them a lift to a drop-in centre and wished them well.

    ‘This is better than being outside in the cold all the time,’
    Bungy said, holding a hot soup.

    ‘Bloody is,’ Spike nodded. His cane chair creaking as he
    leaned back gazing at the bare light bulb suspended from the
    ceiling in the refuge. ‘It’s bizarre now, but after I left the marines I told myself that I would never willingly be cold again. Thinking about it now I feel like a hypocrite.’

    ‘Which Commando Unit did you serve with, Spike?’ Bungy
    asked, sticking to the common subject.

    ‘42 Commando and I specialized in explosives as an
    Assault Engineer. What about you?’

    Bungy’s bushy eyebrows lifted. His sunken cheeks were
    glowing red, along with an angry looking scar spanning the width of his dimpled chin. He managed a smile.

    ‘I was a Mountain Leader and worked mainly as a sniper during
    both Gulf wars. I killed more than my fair share of people. Many
    of them just fell like puppets with their strings cut.’ His smile
    widened as his thoughts drifted off recalling how content he was
    with his life then. ‘I wish I could turn the clock back. I absolutely loved being a marine.’

    ‘Yes me too,’ Spike beamed. ‘I need a drink. How much
    money did you take from the old man’s pockets?’

    ‘I’ve got eighty pounds and twenty pence.’

    ‘Bloody hell! The old codger told me he was broke!’ Spike
    grinned. ‘That’ll buy us a few bottles of plonk to share.’

    Bungy’s face twisted and he shrugged his shoulders. ‘No.
    Let’s keep it and use it to get ourselves out of the gutter.’

    ‘Why should we?’ Spike sneered, his eyes widening in
    disapproval. He craved alcohol and pondered about purchasing
    some. His thoughts turned to the hot soup. Its warmth comforted
    him. I really need a drink, he thought. But maybe Bungy is right.
    Perhaps it would be good to get off the streets. I could get a good wash and a haircut too.

    ‘Yes, okay,’ he nodded. ‘Let’s buy a couple of beers and drink to it!


    Cheers

    Steve
     
  3. Porridge_gun

    Porridge_gun LE Good Egg (charities)

    its a box of pig w@nk

    much like the rest of the authors dribble
     
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  4. This was published today:

    Wasted Resource – Review in Northern Echo Newspaper, Saturday 25th June 2011.When four former soldiers find that life outside the Army is harder than they thought, they decide to use their military skills to make their fortunes. They decide to steal a vast sum of money, previously recovered by the police, and now guarded by the RAF Regiment, but another team, of illegal immigrants also have their eyes on the booty and the job becomes both more complicated and dangerous.
    Seaton Carew author, Preece, a former Royal Marine Commando, has produced a belter of a debut novel, bursting with action and incident. Almost too much, in fact – for ther is enough going on here with robbery, kidnapping, torture, death, a secret weapons dump, MI6 involvement, and a double cross to satisfy any adventure addict.

    Best Regards

    Steve
     
  5. Oh, isnt it lovely when old muckers meet up again,........ Bungy meets Spike, Dinger meets Chalky, Lofty meets Smudge, blah, blah,blah, and they all lived happily ever after............
     
  6. Not to give too much away, but not all of them do :)
     
  7. He changes from broad shouldered to skeletal to a sprinter in seconds....when are the bumming scenes?
     
  8. It's truly abysmal.
    If I was trapped on a desert Island and it was the only book in my possession - if it was the only book for 10,000 nautical miles in any direction - I still wouldn't hesitate to use it for toilet paper and firelighting.
     
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  9. Could you be a little more descriptive about the story and its content, plot etc; or was this just a critical burst without any background to what you are criticising?


    Steve
     
  10. And considerably better eye candy.
     
  11. Which specific part of the plot are you referring to? I am intrigued. And have you read it or are you just shooting from the hip?



    Steve
     
  12. Oh, its a book is it?
    I thought it was a rewrite of the script for the "A-Team" to make it more PC acceptable for the british viewers ( I mean tax-payers)
     
  13. Does the RAF Regiment often guard huge sums of recovered cash?

    Just a honest thought like...

    Other than that the only wasted resource appears to be the trees that died so this could be published.
     
  14. I didn't twig, but am branching out. I'll take a leaf out of the book, about the RAF Regiment. Get the book from the library. All will become clear. Then your criticism may develop a little potential to be constructive.

    Cheers

    Steve
     
  15. Call me old fashioned if you like, but Mr Preece, I think they are trying to say it's shit. Please pardon my language.
     
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