critique please

Discussion in 'Photography' started by No_Duff, Feb 22, 2012.

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  1. Any critique good or bad welcome. The pic has been re-sized to fit.


    Steelworks3.jpg
     
  2. I prefer mine
     

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  3. You f*cker :)
     
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  4. have you missed a bit off?
     
  5. Where did you get bullets that curve through the air like that?
     
  6. Would look better as a panoramic. All that blotchy sky with nowt going on.
     
  7. Have you ever been in a firefight with tracer at night (cold, Belfast, or other)? Or do your rounds defy the laws of gravity?
     
  8. Love the amendments - which highly advanced version of Photoshop are you using?

    Re: the original photo - I love the colour contrast, but I'm not sure about the overall composition - too much sky and not enough foreground detail (this may be because its resized).
     
  9. in_the_cheapseats

    in_the_cheapseats LE Moderator

    too much sky. cut half of that off and make it a panoramic.
     
  10. Sorry, is this better?
     

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  11. Hope you don't mind:

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  12. Well I do mind! How dare you crop my masterpiece!
     
  13. This better ?

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  14. Ravers

    Ravers LE Reviewer Book Reviewer

    I've been there, I also took a pic, I think mine is better.

    Steelworks by night:

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