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    ....and another flower

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    Good, bad, I'm the guy with the Gun.

    Now all the youth of England are on fire,
    And silken dalliance in the wardrobe lies:
    Now thrive the Armourers, and honour's thought
    Reigns solely in the breast of every man.

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    Not quite sure what you were trying to get in focus here? Centre of the flower? Petal detail? I think it loses something from not being able to see the whole flower. Might be better if you had concentrated just on the one bloom as I think having the left hand one included makes it a bit "busy"?

    Nice colour detail on the right hand petals of the right hand flower (tulips, right?) though. What set-up are you using to take these?
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    Somewhere in the distance there was a snapping sound. It sounded a bit like a soggy kit kat breaking......

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    @scaryspice, thank you for your critique. I will have a go at your suggestions.

    Those 2 photos were either taken with a Canon EOS 400D & EF-S F/3.5 - 5.6 18 - 55mm (Tulip) or Canon EOS 7D & 100mm f/2.8L IS Macro Mauve? coloured flower
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    And another Photo for critique :

    A Rat on a stick Yorkie

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    Good, bad, I'm the guy with the Gun.

    Now all the youth of England are on fire,
    And silken dalliance in the wardrobe lies:
    Now thrive the Armourers, and honour's thought
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    Quote Originally Posted by PrinceAlbert View Post
    I prefer mine
    Need to adjust your bomb trajectories - unless they are retard ....

    This is the real thing (not taken by me, obviously).

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    3; 2; 1; Firing NOW.........

    3; 2; 1; Firing NOW ........

    FFS Pass me the bloody matches.

    Si hoc legere scis nimium eruditionis habes!

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    [QUOTE=No_Duff;4373514]And another Photo for critique :

    A Rat on a stick Yorkie

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    Looks a right dog!!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by No_Duff View Post
    And another Photo for critique :

    A Rat on a stick Yorkie
    That's a great shot No_Duff. My only criticism would be the slightly distracting background.
    Somewhere in the distance there was a snapping sound. It sounded a bit like a soggy kit kat breaking......

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    I quite like the out of focus background to that pic!
    It gives it some reality, rather than a plain background a professional would use.
    Just my opinion though :)

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    Quote Originally Posted by scaryspice View Post
    That's a great shot No_Duff. My only criticism would be the slightly distracting background.
    Ditto!

    Q

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    Thanks for the comments, I thought that the steel loop for the Dog Tag might get commented on.
    Good, bad, I'm the guy with the Gun.

    Now all the youth of England are on fire,
    And silken dalliance in the wardrobe lies:
    Now thrive the Armourers, and honour's thought
    Reigns solely in the breast of every man.

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