• Dead Men Risen by Toby Harnden

      Let’s deal first with the elephant in the room. In these days of closing bookshops, kindles and the cloying, ubiquitous mediocrity of the celebrity memoir, few publishers can dream of the double sales and publicity coup of having an entire book run bought and pulped by the MOD for “security” purposes. Toby Harnden’s Dead Men Risen seems to have benefited from, at the very least, some oversight and a little bungling at the over-worked and under-resourced MOD departments that deal with this sort of thing. This topic has been debated heatedly elsewhere on these pages, but a reading of the book itself doesn’t suggest any dark conspiracies – indeed it loses nothing from those lines obviously redacted (which perhaps suggests deleting them might not have been such a problem either).


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      None of which should be allowed to detract from what is a very strong addition to the growing library of books on contemporary operations (for which this reviewer would like to propose the new umbrella term of TiC Lit’). Harnden’s account of the Welsh Guards Battlegroup on Op Herrick X is better than most at balancing overview with detail and is accordingly as accessible and informative to someone approaching the subject for the first time as it is familiar and accurate to those well acquainted with the ditches and shattered compounds that are its stage. Harnden’s opening chapters are particularly impressive in summarizing in broad but pretty accurate and eloquent strokes salient details of both the history of the Welsh Guards and Operation Herrick.

      As many of those on this site will already know, the Welsh Guards suffered casualties at all levels of the Battlegroup; an attached Guardsman and Private, a Lance Corporal, a Lance Sergeant, a Platoon Commander, a Company Commander and, for the first time since the Falklands, the Commanding Officer himself. These moments, although perhaps more emotionally than strategically significant, provide an effective structure for the book and a personal counterpoint to the strategic backdrop of Operation Panther’s Claw. Though previous media attention has tended to be focussed on Colonel Rupert’s seniority and Lieutenant Mark Evison’s well-publicized diaries, Harnden is to be commended for weighing each subsequent blow evenly, and in context. Exhaustive homework has been done and the scenes are painted vividly and harrowingly, certain passages will be difficult to read for those who knew the men or have been in similar situations and Harnden, a friend of Thorneloe’s in particular, must have found certain passages equally difficult to write.

      The effect, however, is rightfully powerful. Harnden’s prose is readable and his style direct, he captures the soldiers’ voice well and the accessibility of the book belies its near 600 pages. Harnden, formerly in the Royal Navy, has a perhaps more instinctive feel for soldiers than more “civilian” writers who have attempted similar exercises. His unsparing accounts of IED strikes intermingle with moments of particularly squaddie humour and lightness – the Guardsman striding determinedly towards a primitive and pungent loo with a gas-mark and a laptop brought a particular smile and has the ring of authenticity beyond the usual tour clichés. That is not to say there aren’t some of those, but it is the nature of clichés that they tend to be true. Acts of courage that begin to seem commonplace with repetition; the frustrations of trying and all too often failing to engage with the locals; the tensions that exist between companies, battlegroups and Brigade. To one extent these are increasingly familiar tropes of books about Afghanistan, but that is surely because they are recurrent themes. In an effort, largely successful, to humanize his individual suspects, Harnden dwells on background: the Welsh Guards officers public schooling (or lack thereof) and “Hollywood” good looks will possibly be of greater interest to the lay reader than those from within the military. Similarly, for this reviewer at least (albeit, without an intimate knowledge of the sub-units involved) the “soldiers as drama-merchants back home” narrative was slightly played-up. No doubt that some of the best fighting men are not the best camp soldiers, but the vague impression of a preponderance of Wellington era vagabonds seems more at home in lazily scripted BBC dramas than a fine study like this one.

      The usual criticism will be levelled at the author of what is essentially a unit history: the focus is unashamedly on the Welsh Guards, although Harnden does better than many in acknowledging and discussing contributions from those attached to the Battlegroup and in the wider Brigade – his chapter on the exploits of the 4 Rifles sniper team may have discomforted some when widely serialized in the Telegraph, but is an excellent part of the book. Equally the difficulty of enduring life in the rear-party is well treated and some of the most moving scenes are those played out in Aldershot and Wales in front of grim faced Casualty Notification Officers.

      Most six month tours of Afghanistan start with tempered optimism and a sense of determination, endure extreme highs and lows and finish with a proud but all too often saddened home-coming. Dead Men Risen is probably not the definitive ‘Afghanistan’ book, but nor does it set out to be. It captures the trajectory of a Battlegroup’s tour effectively and is a valuable contribution to this growing body of work and if it ends up posing more questions than it answers then it does so because that is the nature of current operations in Helmand.

      Four Mr Mushroomheads.

      rasselas



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      Comments 22 Comments
      1. tropper66's Avatar
        tropper66 -
        A seriously impressive review, IMHO
      1. Jacob1650's Avatar
        Jacob1650 -
        Did you write it?
      1. tropper66's Avatar
        tropper66 -
        Quote Originally Posted by Jacob1650 View Post
        Did you write it?

        Did I fuck, think Jim 24 blotted his copy book by blatantly promoting the book
      1. Rawr's Avatar
        Rawr -
        I'm currently half way through the book and would agree with everything in the review. Recommended reading.
      1. strategos's Avatar
        strategos -
        Excellent review, well done.
      1. Auld-Yin's Avatar
        Auld-Yin -
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      1. Rod Spinks's Avatar
        Rod Spinks -
        If this book is half as good as "Man Down" a true story of Marine Mark Ormrod who lost both his legs and one arm on Xmas Eve 2008 then it has to be good.I would recommend this book 100% as its a story of real Guts and a positive approach which Royal Marines Commandos have.
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      1. Captain_Crusty's Avatar
        Captain_Crusty -
        Quote Originally Posted by Rawr View Post
        I'm currently half way through the book and would agree with everything in the review. Recommended reading.
        I've just finished reading the book and thought it a well written account of a Battle Group's time in Afghanistan.

        It has to be said though, that some of the comments made on individuals, in particular officers, I found a little harsh. That isn't to say they were not true but when read in the comfort of the UK, may not give an accurate picture of decisions made under fire and considerable stress.
      1. postman_twit's Avatar
        postman_twit -
        Excellent book but it would be a very harsh (graphic) read for the families of the fallen.
      1. tropper66's Avatar
        tropper66 -
        Well worth a visit



        Hay Festival - Toby Harnden
      1. jim24's Avatar
        jim24 -
        I met Toby Harnden yesterday at the Hay on Wye book festival and the simple sincerity of his talk was f@cking amazing. The audience was made up of a large number of the great and the good from all over Wales, including at least one MP, a number of retired senior officers and the former leader of the Conservative Party in the Welsh assembly, and considering the fact that he had confided in me that he was worried about what to say , he held 400 people spellbound for almost an hour, it was f@cking brilliant,
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        jim24 -
        toby harnden - Topics - WalesOnline

        THE author of a controversial book about Afghanistan has said it is a "national disgrace" that Lt Col Rupert Thorneloe, who became the most senior British officer to die in action for 27 years, was not given a bravery award.

        Toby Harnden, The Daily Telegraph's US editor and author of Dead Men Risen: The Welsh Guards and the Real Story of Britain's War in Afghanistan cast doubt on the Army's official stance – that Lt Col Thorneloe, 39, had not received an award because neither the Order of the British Empire nor the Distinguished Service Order can be given posthumously.

        Harnden said that he had been told that Lt Col Thorneloe, who was commanding the Welsh Guards, had not been honoured because he had spoken out about shortages and a flawed strategy. He was killed in July 2009 by a roadside bomb.

        The first print run of 24,000 copies of Dead Men Risen was pulped after legal wrangling with the Ministry of Defence. Among the sensitive passages were those taken from documents written by Lt Col Thorneloe in which he was highly critical of his superiors.

        He was given a posthumous Queen's Commendation for Valuable Service, an award that Harnden said had been described as "the military equivalent of a Blue Peter badge". He added: "A DSO, a Military Cross, a Queen's Gallantry Medal, a George Medal or even a George Cross could have been justified. The will in the senior ranks of the Army simply wasn't there."
      1. mucus2's Avatar
        mucus2 -
        Currently reading this, I can't put it down. Bloody brilliant.
      1. baboon6's Avatar
        baboon6 -
        Just finished it, excellent.
      1. CigarIsland's Avatar
        CigarIsland -
        finished this towards the end of last year and it certainly didn't put the military top brass in a good light, also towards the end to the Welsh Guards tour it goes on to tell how blokes where thredders either refusing to go out on patrol or giving themselves self inflicted wounds to get out of going on patrol. I agree with a previous update that it wouldn't have made good reading to families of the fallen as again it's pretty graphic on the state of some of those hit by IED's etc.
      1. tobyharnden's Avatar
        tobyharnden -
        Quote Originally Posted by Captain_Crusty View Post
        I've just finished reading the book and thought it a well written account of a Battle Group's time in Afghanistan.

        It has to be said though, that some of the comments made on individuals, in particular officers, I found a little harsh. That isn't to say they were not true but when read in the comfort of the UK, may not give an accurate picture of decisions made under fire and considerable stress.
        Yes, this is something I really struggled with. But I think I made the point you made right at the start of DMR - it's all to easy to judge from the comfort of being back home and with the benefit of hindsight. That said, in war some people perform better than others and I wanted to reflect that reality. If you say everyone was brave and brilliant then you kind of diminish those who really were. In general, with those who were criticised or likely to be embarrassed I gave them pseudonyms. With some, that was not possible. Without going into too much detail, I took an incredible amount of care with all the portrayals - nothing critical was written without there being ample evidence from multiple sources and there was considerable debate on these types of issues between me and the Regiment and MOD.
      1. pimpernel's Avatar
        pimpernel -
        It was an outstanding, and very sobering read. I have just finished it, and would give it a 5 star rating. As has been said, it is very graphic for the fallen.
      1. BuggerAll's Avatar
        BuggerAll -
        I read this and agree with pretty much everything that's been said about it.

        This book also made me quite angry. One can sense and almost share Colonel Thornloe's frustration when the orders he was given for PANTHER's CLAW did not mesh with his estimate of the situation.
      1. HHH's Avatar
        HHH -
        I see this book has won the Orwell prize for political writing.

        BBC News - Afghan war book wins Orwell Prize for political writing
      1. Hobo-Ken's Avatar
        Hobo-Ken -
        Quote Originally Posted by HHH View Post
        I see this book has won the Orwell prize for political writing.

        BBC News - Afghan war book wins Orwell Prize for political writing
        And well-deserved. It's an outstanding account.